Hi Chris,
Post by Burke Chris-CCB007Well, a complete first draft, anyway. Let me know what you think, how to
make the content more usable. I still want to get this up on the web site
looks fine to me! Three remarks:
o In the first paragraph you say ``discuss creation of new IETF working
groups''. This is correct, but may mislead raeders to think that every
BOF leads to a WG, which is not the case. How about something like
``evaluate interest in a certain topic which may lead to the creation of
a new IETF WG''?
o The second paragraph contains `` ... posted to the IETF New Work mailing
list ...''. Instead of linking in a mailto:-URL I'd suggest pointing to a
descriptive page for that mailing list. I must admit, I've seen it in
the address field of BOF announcements, but what exactly is its purpose?
o Also for BOFs a plea to people to prepare in advance and read the documents
might be appropriate in the explanation section.
-Peter